Talk:The Office
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:You are making it clear that you are an anonymous user who has a complaint. Other regular users underwent a process of nomination to make this a Featured Article. If you feel you'd like input in what makes a Featured Article, why not join in the discussions? You're more than welcome. {{User:Qermaq/sig}} 23:21, 30 May 2006 (UTC) | :You are making it clear that you are an anonymous user who has a complaint. Other regular users underwent a process of nomination to make this a Featured Article. If you feel you'd like input in what makes a Featured Article, why not join in the discussions? You're more than welcome. {{User:Qermaq/sig}} 23:21, 30 May 2006 (UTC) | ||
| - | ::I know this discussion is a year old, but maybe it would be a good time to rework this article and try to integrate the new content better. I think the main problem is that every time the Office is | + | ::I know this discussion is a year old, but maybe it would be a good time to rework this article and try to integrate the new content better. I think the main problem is that every time the Office is featured in a toon, a radical, new, and important detail of office life get showcased, and then we just append a paragraph about that somewhere in the article, without relating that to the other paragraphs. This paragraph showcases what I mean. |
::<blockquote>Pom Pom is the "big cheese" of the company, and Homestar, being Pom Pom's friend, has admin privileges, although he still remains extremely obedient to Pom Pom.</blockquote> | ::<blockquote>Pom Pom is the "big cheese" of the company, and Homestar, being Pom Pom's friend, has admin privileges, although he still remains extremely obedient to Pom Pom.</blockquote> | ||
| - | ::I wonder if we can't integrate this content better. If we improve the flow, the article as a whole will be much improved. What do you think?{{User:Geshmalderborgen/sig}} 01:58, 22 April 2007 (UTC) | + | ::That seems to be completely out of sync with the paragraphs bofore and after. I wonder if we can't integrate this content better. If we improve the flow, the article as a whole will be much improved. What do you think?{{User:Geshmalderborgen/sig}} 01:58, 22 April 2007 (UTC) |
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| The Office is a featured article, which means it showcases an important part of the Homestar Runner body of work and/or highlights the fine work of this wiki. We also might just think it's cool. If you see a way this page can be updated or improved without compromising previous work, feel free to contribute. |
"Homestar's work area has not yet been featured"
Why... yes it has. It was in the email ISP. Duh.
One of the best articles?
The Office is one of the worst articles I've ever read. It is merely a collection of sentences.
It has just a bunch of unconnected thoughts stapled together. It is comprised of brief recollections of every time it has appeared, probably in order.
It has separated paragraphs for no reason.
Am I making myself clear? — 70.72.58.215 (Talk | contribs) 23:15, 30 May 2006 (left unsigned)
- If you don't feel that it's a good enough article JamesDean, feel free to improve it yourself, instead of simply criticizing other's work. ⇔Thunderbird⇔ 23:19, 30 May 2006 (UTC)
- You are making it clear that you are an anonymous user who has a complaint. Other regular users underwent a process of nomination to make this a Featured Article. If you feel you'd like input in what makes a Featured Article, why not join in the discussions? You're more than welcome. - Qermaq - (T/C)
23:21, 30 May 2006 (UTC)
- I know this discussion is a year old, but maybe it would be a good time to rework this article and try to integrate the new content better. I think the main problem is that every time the Office is featured in a toon, a radical, new, and important detail of office life get showcased, and then we just append a paragraph about that somewhere in the article, without relating that to the other paragraphs. This paragraph showcases what I mean.
Pom Pom is the "big cheese" of the company, and Homestar, being Pom Pom's friend, has admin privileges, although he still remains extremely obedient to Pom Pom.
- That seems to be completely out of sync with the paragraphs bofore and after. I wonder if we can't integrate this content better. If we improve the flow, the article as a whole will be much improved. What do you think? גשמלדרברגן (Geshmalder) 01:58, 22 April 2007 (UTC)
