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'''Cast (in order of appearance):''' {{Film|Tompkins}}, [[Minor Teen Girl Squad Characters#Momkins|Momkins]], [[Minor Teen Girl Squad Characters#Timkins|Baby Timkins]], [[Minor Teen Girl Squad Characters#Tompkins's Virtual Pet|Tompkins's Virtual Pet]], {{Film|So and So}}, {{Film|Arrow'd Guy}}, {{Film|Cheerleader}}, {{Film|What's Her Face}}, {{Film|The Ugly One}}, [[Minor Teen Girl Squad Characters#Buttcrack Plumber|Plumber]], {{film|Peacey P}}, {{Film|Olympic Man}}, [[Minor Teen Girl Squad Characters#The Policemen|Policemen]] | '''Cast (in order of appearance):''' {{Film|Tompkins}}, [[Minor Teen Girl Squad Characters#Momkins|Momkins]], [[Minor Teen Girl Squad Characters#Timkins|Baby Timkins]], [[Minor Teen Girl Squad Characters#Tompkins's Virtual Pet|Tompkins's Virtual Pet]], {{Film|So and So}}, {{Film|Arrow'd Guy}}, {{Film|Cheerleader}}, {{Film|What's Her Face}}, {{Film|The Ugly One}}, [[Minor Teen Girl Squad Characters#Buttcrack Plumber|Plumber]], {{film|Peacey P}}, {{Film|Olympic Man}}, [[Minor Teen Girl Squad Characters#The Policemen|Policemen]] | ||
- | '''Places:''' [[Teen Girl Squad Locations#Tompkins's House|Tompkins's | + | '''Places:''' [[Teen Girl Squad Locations#Tompkins's House|Tompkins's house]], [[Teen Girl Squad Locations#Hotel Balcony|Hotel Balcony]] |
'''Date:''' Monday, June 18, 2007 | '''Date:''' Monday, June 18, 2007 | ||
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'''THE UGLY ONE:''' Did somebody say Peacey P? I LOVES the Peacey P! | '''THE UGLY ONE:''' Did somebody say Peacey P? I LOVES the Peacey P! | ||
- | ''{Cut to Peacey P, wearing a jersey labeled "☮y P", standing with Olympic Man (with a blurred jersey)}'' | + | ''{Cut to Peacey P, wearing a jersey labeled "☮y P" ("[Peace symbol]y P"), standing with Olympic Man (with a blurred jersey)}'' |
- | '''PEACEY P:''' Crample-o stow wha clamminuh whaow. My new album drop next sursdai. Ya'll | + | '''PEACEY P:''' Crample-o stow wha clamminuh whaow. My new album drop next sursdai. Ya'll biscuitheads. |
- | ''{The Ugly One enters with a ☮y necklace, and a pencil and notepad.}'' | + | ''{The Ugly One enters with a ☮y ([Peace symbol]y) necklace, and a pencil and notepad.}'' |
'''THE UGLY ONE:''' Can a sista get an autograph? | '''THE UGLY ONE:''' Can a sista get an autograph? | ||
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:'''ANNOUNCER:''' ...featuring: Large Craig, featuring: The Overripe MC, featuring: Tenerence Love, featuring: Akryllix & 3rd Lung, featuring: Peacey P! | :'''ANNOUNCER:''' ...featuring: Large Craig, featuring: The Overripe MC, featuring: Tenerence Love, featuring: Akryllix & 3rd Lung, featuring: Peacey P! | ||
:''{A speech bubble appears next to Peacey P's picture, containing the following words:}'' | :''{A speech bubble appears next to Peacey P's picture, containing the following words:}'' | ||
- | :'''PEACEY P:''' I'm a guest star on my own album, ya'll | + | :'''PEACEY P:''' I'm a guest star on my own album, ya'll biscuitheads! |
:''{The words "Drops Next Sursdai!" appear in a red oval at the bottom. Music fades out}'' | :''{The words "Drops Next Sursdai!" appear in a red oval at the bottom. Music fades out}'' | ||
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===Remarks=== | ===Remarks=== | ||
*The '2 pantries' are mirror images of one another. | *The '2 pantries' are mirror images of one another. | ||
+ | *When So and So yells "Ah! The popo!" it's not in a word balloon, but her next line is. | ||
*Peacey P's new album is said to come out next 'sursdai'. However, officially released albums are always released on a Tuesday. | *Peacey P's new album is said to come out next 'sursdai'. However, officially released albums are always released on a Tuesday. | ||
*This is the first Teen Girl Squad issue to include a [[Wikipedia:suicide|suicide]]; all of the deaths up to this point have been [[Wikipedia:homicide|homicides]] or accidents. | *This is the first Teen Girl Squad issue to include a [[Wikipedia:suicide|suicide]]; all of the deaths up to this point have been [[Wikipedia:homicide|homicides]] or accidents. | ||
**It is also possible that So and So thought she could go through the garbage disposal safely, and wasn't trying to commit suicide. | **It is also possible that So and So thought she could go through the garbage disposal safely, and wasn't trying to commit suicide. | ||
+ | *"Ya'll" should be spelled "Y'all". | ||
===Goofs=== | ===Goofs=== | ||
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*Once the police officer starts talking to What's Her Face, the nose on the door's face is suddenly half as long. | *Once the police officer starts talking to What's Her Face, the nose on the door's face is suddenly half as long. | ||
*The Ugly One's line, "That's it?", is missing the apostrophe. | *The Ugly One's line, "That's it?", is missing the apostrophe. | ||
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===Fixed Goofs=== | ===Fixed Goofs=== | ||
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*What's Her Face comments about the loss of her [[style]]. | *What's Her Face comments about the loss of her [[style]]. | ||
*When Tompkins pushes the buttons on his [[Nintendo|Game Boy]] to feed his virtual pet, the text [[Mashing|"m.a.s.h."]] appears. | *When Tompkins pushes the buttons on his [[Nintendo|Game Boy]] to feed his virtual pet, the text [[Mashing|"m.a.s.h."]] appears. | ||
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*So and So saying "I can't do another nickel!" is likely in reference to [[Teen Girl Squad Issue 11]] when So and So was in jail for shoplifting. | *So and So saying "I can't do another nickel!" is likely in reference to [[Teen Girl Squad Issue 11]] when So and So was in jail for shoplifting. | ||
*Tompkins's mom's name ends with [[Names ending in -erson|-erson]]. | *Tompkins's mom's name ends with [[Names ending in -erson|-erson]]. | ||
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===Fast Forward=== | ===Fast Forward=== | ||
- | * The album art for "deliberance" (from the Easter egg) appears in the opening for | + | * The album art for "deliberance" (from the Easter egg) appears in the opening for Podstar Runner. |
* The phrase "She gone!" was reused in [[Strong Bad Gameways]]. | * The phrase "She gone!" was reused in [[Strong Bad Gameways]]. | ||
* Tenerence Love and Peacey P would later collaborate in an Easter egg in [[Teen Girl Squad Issue 15|Issue 15]]. | * Tenerence Love and Peacey P would later collaborate in an Easter egg in [[Teen Girl Squad Issue 15|Issue 15]]. | ||
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==DVD Version== | ==DVD Version== | ||
- | + | *The DVD version features hidden creators' commentary. To access it, switch your DVD player's audio language selection while watching. | |
=== Commentary Transcript === | === Commentary Transcript === | ||
('''Commentary by:''' [[Mike Chapman]], [[Matt Chapman]], [[Ryan Sterritt]]) | ('''Commentary by:''' [[Mike Chapman]], [[Matt Chapman]], [[Ryan Sterritt]]) | ||
- | '''MATT:''' What a weird | + | '''MATT:''' What a weird— this is a weird beginning to a Teen Girl Squad, Mike. |
'''MIKE:''' Where are they!? | '''MIKE:''' Where are they!? | ||
- | '''MATT:''' Yeah! Wha | + | '''MATT:''' Yeah! Wha— Are we even watching the Teen Girl Squad? Is this the Tompkins Progrum? |
- | '''MIKE:''' ''{simultaneous with last sentence}'' Change cha | + | '''MIKE:''' ''{simultaneous with last sentence}'' Change cha— we must be on the wro— our TiVo messed up and recorded the wrong channel. |
'''MATT:''' ''{laughs, pauses until Tompkins laughs}'' We should make a game on the website where you try and overfeed your virtual pet. | '''MATT:''' ''{laughs, pauses until Tompkins laughs}'' We should make a game on the website where you try and overfeed your virtual pet. | ||
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'''MATT:''' I do. Tompkins' mom reminds me of a Robotic Stooge. ''{pause}'' She gone! | '''MATT:''' I do. Tompkins' mom reminds me of a Robotic Stooge. ''{pause}'' She gone! | ||
- | '''MIKE:''' Wasn't it called | + | '''MIKE:''' Wasn't it called— weren't they called the Robomic Stooges, though? |
'''MATT:''' Really? | '''MATT:''' Really? | ||
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'''MATT:''' Really? | '''MATT:''' Really? | ||
- | '''MIKE:''' For some reas | + | '''MIKE:''' For some reas— |
'''MATT:''' Why? | '''MATT:''' Why? | ||
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'''MIKE:''' I don't know. | '''MIKE:''' I don't know. | ||
- | '''MATT:''' Somebody | + | '''MATT:''' Somebody— |
'''MIKE:''' We'll have to Wikipedia that. | '''MIKE:''' We'll have to Wikipedia that. | ||
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''{pause}'' | ''{pause}'' | ||
- | '''MIKE:''' I, uh | + | '''MIKE:''' I, uh— I think I babysat ''once''. |
'''MATT:''' Yeah? | '''MATT:''' Yeah? | ||
- | '''MIKE:''' Yeah, for these two kids. And, uh... I liter | + | '''MIKE:''' Yeah, for these two kids. And, uh... I liter— I had to fix a Teddy Ruxpin. |
'''RYAN:''' Really? | '''RYAN:''' Really? | ||
- | '''MIKE:''' The Teddy Ruxpin was messed up and I had to fix | + | '''MIKE:''' The Teddy Ruxpin was messed up and I had to fix— you know, figure out how to fix it 'cause the kid was bawling. |
'''MATT:''' Nice. Did you put, like, AC/DC in there, like, instead of his tape? | '''MATT:''' Nice. Did you put, like, AC/DC in there, like, instead of his tape? | ||
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'''MIKE:''' ''{overlapping Matt's comment}'' Yeah. The tape. | '''MIKE:''' ''{overlapping Matt's comment}'' Yeah. The tape. | ||
- | '''MATT:''' So, it'd, like | + | '''MATT:''' So, it'd, like— |
'''MIKE:''' Backwards Satan. | '''MIKE:''' Backwards Satan. | ||
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'''MIKE:''' Yeah. | '''MIKE:''' Yeah. | ||
- | '''MATT:''' Oh, Randy | + | '''MATT:''' Oh, Randy— Randy Buttcrack! ''{Mike laughs}'' He's talking on a— He's talking on a plunger, Ryan. |
'''RYAN:''' With a cord. | '''RYAN:''' With a cord. | ||
- | '''MATT:''' We | + | '''MATT:''' We— Weren't we going to do— We were going to do an Easter egg. We never did that Easter egg of a commercial for Buttcrack Plumbing. |
'''MIKE:''' Oh, that's right. | '''MIKE:''' Oh, that's right. | ||
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'''MATT:''' Nice. | '''MATT:''' Nice. | ||
- | '''RYAN:''' I think it might've been a | + | '''RYAN:''' I think it might've been a— |
'''MATT:''' Did you get it from from... | '''MATT:''' Did you get it from from... | ||
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''{Mike and Matt laugh}'' | ''{Mike and Matt laugh}'' | ||
- | '''RYAN:''' Late '80s. ''{pause}'' We even | + | '''RYAN:''' Late '80s. ''{pause}'' We even— I think we had a, uh... uh... |
''{pause}'' | ''{pause}'' | ||
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'''MIKE:''' Nice. | '''MIKE:''' Nice. | ||
- | '''MATT:''' Wow. Oh, here he is. Here's the man. ''{pause}'' Umm.. how about how in every hip-hop video there's some | + | '''MATT:''' Wow. Oh, here he is. Here's the man. ''{pause}'' Umm.. how about how in every hip-hop video there's some— some— |
'''MIKE:''' Blurred out logo. | '''MIKE:''' Blurred out logo. | ||
- | '''MATT:''' | + | '''MATT:''' —some dude that just wore a Nike shirt. And it's just like— |
'''MIKE:''' "What's up, man!?" | '''MIKE:''' "What's up, man!?" | ||
- | '''MATT:''' ''{simultaneously}'' "I told you, man! Just don't show up in a stupid Nike shirt, please! I told you we were filming a video, and you still wore your Nike shirt." The best part is when it's, like, the dude | + | '''MATT:''' ''{simultaneously}'' "I told you, man! Just don't show up in a stupid Nike shirt, please! I told you we were filming a video, and you still wore your Nike shirt." The best part is when it's, like, the dude— the main guy— the main rapper— |
'''RYAN:''' Snoop Dogg. | '''RYAN:''' Snoop Dogg. | ||
- | '''MATT:''' | + | '''MATT:''' —couldn't be troubled to... change his shirt. |
'''RYAN:''' I remember if you watched 'em on BET you could see the pot leaf on the, uh... the... Dr. Dre... | '''RYAN:''' I remember if you watched 'em on BET you could see the pot leaf on the, uh... the... Dr. Dre... | ||
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'''MATT:''' Really? They didn't blur it out, or they just did a bad job of blurring it out? | '''MATT:''' Really? They didn't blur it out, or they just did a bad job of blurring it out? | ||
- | '''RYAN:''' ''{overlapping Matt}'' No, I remember, like, seeing it. It just | + | '''RYAN:''' ''{overlapping Matt}'' No, I remember, like, seeing it. It just— They didn't blur it out. |
'''MATT:''' Oh! ''{pause}'' Look! It's the cops from The Simpsons! Lou and Eddie, is that their names? Looks kinda like Lou and Eddie. | '''MATT:''' Oh! ''{pause}'' Look! It's the cops from The Simpsons! Lou and Eddie, is that their names? Looks kinda like Lou and Eddie. |