Talk:The Yello Dello

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Does anybody else think this page sounds a little bit too informal? - [[User:Isaac Smith|Isaac Smith]]
Does anybody else think this page sounds a little bit too informal? - [[User:Isaac Smith|Isaac Smith]]
:What is informal about it? The "rare and beautiful" bit is a quote from [[In Search of the Yello Dello]], the "hot" bit is from the [[In Search of the Yello Dello Commentary|Commentary]] and everything else is just straight facts... can you suggest anything specific that needs fixing? {{User:Phlip/sig}} 16:30, 21 April 2006 (UTC)
:What is informal about it? The "rare and beautiful" bit is a quote from [[In Search of the Yello Dello]], the "hot" bit is from the [[In Search of the Yello Dello Commentary|Commentary]] and everything else is just straight facts... can you suggest anything specific that needs fixing? {{User:Phlip/sig}} 16:30, 21 April 2006 (UTC)
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::I do understand that this is just straight facts. Perhaps stating exactly where the "rare and beautiful" part came from in the article. What makes me feel like this article is too informal is the fact that it begins with "'''The Yello  Dello''' is one hot bird." If there was a way to make it known that the Yello Dello is hot without coming out and directly stating it, then that would seem more encyclopedia-ish. For example, put that Strong Bad says that the bird is hot, and put it in the context from the commentary. - [[User:Isaac Smith|Isaac Smith]]

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Despite being female, it sure has a very masculine voice. --67.173.78.158 05:15, 12 Jun 2005 (UTC)

Tis true, 67.173.78.158, tis true. --—Darklinkskywalker|Talk_|i did this stuff_ 03:03, 20 Jul 2005 (UTC)

apparently, its weird--Ed500 12:54, 19 October 2005 (UTC)

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Does anybody else think this page sounds a little bit too informal? - Isaac Smith

What is informal about it? The "rare and beautiful" bit is a quote from In Search of the Yello Dello, the "hot" bit is from the Commentary and everything else is just straight facts... can you suggest anything specific that needs fixing? --phlip TC 16:30, 21 April 2006 (UTC)
I do understand that this is just straight facts. Perhaps stating exactly where the "rare and beautiful" part came from in the article. What makes me feel like this article is too informal is the fact that it begins with "The Yello Dello is one hot bird." If there was a way to make it known that the Yello Dello is hot without coming out and directly stating it, then that would seem more encyclopedia-ish. For example, put that Strong Bad says that the bird is hot, and put it in the context from the commentary. - Isaac Smith
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